#9 Response to plagiarism article

In the article we read about plagiarism, it becomes clear that the issue of plagiarism, is not exactly set in stone. What is acceptable, is not clear as well as Turnitin.com's readings of plagiarism. The girl did not intentionally pull word for word out of her sources and into her paper. The main issue was that her work was not sited correctly but she plagiarized a 9 page paper over 53%. That's over four pages of quoting directly from the source. They were not her words, they were the sources. Plus she did not cite the sites in both the work cited as well as the citations throughout the paragraph. She only cited the sources in the work cited. Even if she did summarize from a source though, she must still cite that it was someone else's idea.

Blog #8: Thanksgiving Weekend

During the Thanksgiving weekend, I had a nice Thanksgiving dinner at my Aunt's house in western Jersey. We had a wonderful time, with all the food in the world. My favorite was the pumpkin pie however, that my sister baked. Then friday, my mother always feels that she needs to repeat a holiday if it is not hosted at our house, so she cooked a whole new Thanksgiving feast which was delicious, friday night. It was just my mother, father, sister's and their boyfriends, so it was a nice little get together. Saturday was just a fun day and Sunday my baby cousins visited, which was very fun.

Blog #7- News Log: How Cirque du Soleil re-invented the Big-Top Show

Summary- Cirque du Soleil was created in 1984 with a group of street performers in Montreal. Now, Cirque du Soleil is a billion dollar entertainment business with over 5,000 employees from all around the world. These shows have reinvented the circus to a more cultural and acrobatic level. Cirque du Soleil has invented 20 shows all with original ideas. The show ideas are open to all expertise and the production team is willing to work with anything thrown at them. If someone wants to try something new, they will explore that area and see what other various ideas it may lead to. As a result, brilliant products are made. Since the show is composed of various wild acrobats and stunts, many people question the safety of the performers. However, in an interview with Fabrice Lemire, artistic director for Quidam, he assures the interviewer that all the performers are "highly trained. they're highly quialified for what they do, so what we do is that during the training session....there are experts on all levels to supervise the process, and everything is really, really taken under the microscope." All the shows are done live and the music is created to fit each specific act. Professional musicians are able to improvise and change music in a moment, in order to accommodate any glitches or issues that may occur throughout the duration of the performance.

My Opinion? I believe Cirque du Soleil is an incredible, exciting show being as I've seen one of their recent shows, Zarkana. The amount of talent put into each show is unbelievable. Between the acrobatic talent, dancing, singing, music, art and culture portrayed within the shows, the directors do a wonderfully detailed job at incorporating all the aspects of a circus, into a more modern, riveting show. Unlike a typical circus, Cirque du Soleil adds a storyline to their shows, as well as original music and no animals! While watching the shows, you really obtain a sense of French, Russian, Italian, and Asian culture from the costumes/makeup, to the actual acts themselves. In the midst of the heavy acrobatic performances, comedic acts are placed strategically 

throughout the entirety of the show. One interesting, defining aspect of the show is the lack of speaking. There is singing, but lack of speaking. Instead, sounds are created to relay the message across to the audience. By using this technique, the actors/directors have the ability to reach the audience at a new level; a creative artist level, which, to me, puts Cirque du Soleil in a whole new category of entertainment. It is honestly the most enthralling show I have ever seen. After watching the performance, you are left in aw as you wonder about the talent these people posses as well as the cultural experience the show has just put you through. Cirque du Soleil has certainly raised the bar for the title of "circus" and has brought a sensational form of entertainment. 

http://www.npr.org/2011/11/17/142466017/cirque-du-soleil-reinvents-the-big-top-show

Blog #6- Animal

If you could be any animal, what would you be and why?
If I could be any animal, I would probably be a dog because I would be able to comfort a loving family and rest whenever I wanted. I could run and play as well as lay by the families feet while they watch a movie. Dogs are very loyal and family oriented and that's why I would like to be one because you will always be with someone and never be alone.

Blog #5- The best thing about this week was...

When at work, a patient complimented me on how I handle situations and treat him as a patient. He said I was very thorough, attentive, and kind and said "for being a high school student, I respect you very much." That was an extremely pleasant comment and really brightened my day because it almost gives me a sense of hope for my future.

Blog #4- Things that bug me

1.) Those who ask too many questions
2.) Those who smell unpleasant
3.) Those who do not give a thanking gesture after you let them go at an intersection
4.) Excessive amounts of homework
5.) Those who stop walking when you are directly behind them

Blog #3- Courage

"Courage doesn't always roar. Sometimes courage is the quiet voice at the end of the day saying 'I will try again tomorrow'." -Mary Anne Radmacher

The quote reminds me of when I had to gather the courage before going into surgery unexpectedly. It was a Tuesday afternoon, and I began to feel very ill, my stomach was causing me excruciating pain, but I proceeded through the rest of the school day. After school comes around and I'm doubled over with pain. I had never felt anything like it before. It was so unbearable that I was at the point of tears. Normally, I'd go straight to play rehearsal, but today, I needed to go home right away. I called my mom and she picked me up. She took one look at me and knew I wasn't well. I knew myself, that this was nothing I've experienced before. I had a nasty feeling of what my problem was, appendicitis. It's quite common actually, but it is still frightening. My mom took me straight to the doctor and before I knew it, I was in the Valley Hospital hooked up to IVs. Nurses were ordering an ultra sound already and the attending surgeon was examining my abdomen. He told me it was most likely appendicitis so I hit that diagnosis on the nose. I became extremely frightened at that moment when they told me I needed to have surgery to remove the appendix ASAP. Not even four hours ago I was in school! It all happened so quickly that I had no time to mentally prepare myself for going into surgery. I had forgotten what it felt like to undergo anesthesia, I had forgotten how frightening the whole process was. What if they mess something up? What if I never wake up and never get to see my family again? I was extremely tempted to just decline the surgery even though it was absolutely necessary to receive. I had to muster up a lot of courage to say "Bye, see you when I wake up. I love you guys," to my family. It was a routine surgery but I was still extremely scared. I needed that roar of courage in order to go through with it. And once that courage comes to you, you realize you are able to accomplish things you never thought possible or that seemed too outrageous to experience. But I did it and everything went smoothly. I woke up to see my family standing right at the end of my bed. Sometimes you need that boost of courage to accomplish what is unerring. 

Blog #2: My Scarlet Letter

The letter that I would be wearing, would be an L. This "L" represents lackadaisical because I tend to want to sit back and enjoy life but in life, you need to work in order to reach that enjoyment sometimes but I find myself shying away from work that does not interest me or have any significance to me. Such as my math homework, I always do it but if I am having trouble, I really have to bring myself to go in for extra help because it is not something that appeals to me nor will I need a majority of it later in life. Because of these factors, it is hard for me to bring myself to complete certain tasks that I know will not be of use later on in life.
However there are times where I'm just in a lazy mood and do not want to do any form of work and just relax, give myself a break, and do what I want to do. There is rarely ever a time when I can do that though, because work never stops; something always needs to get done or something could always be improved.

MP 2 Blog #1: How are love and hate alike?

Hate and love are both two very strong emotions. They can be similar in the sense that when you love something, you are in tune with it, you want to be involved in it in a strong way. When you hate something, you do not want to be a part of whatever it may be and you do not care for it in a strong way. They are both used to connect to certain ideas/things but yet can have polar connotations.

#10: News Log- Drug Terms Reduce, Freeing Prisoners

Summary- A new law has been passed by Congress called the Fair Sentencing Act of 2010, which will reduce sentencing disparity to 18 to 1. This act was passed due to the numerous controversies associated with the thousands of nonviolent criminals who ended up with sentences that were "extreme" and the disparity was viewed as racially tinged as well. When the first drug law was passed, back in 1980, cocaine use and crimes associated with the drug were through the roof. This is apparently due to the turf wars once the drug first hit the streets. Now, over 12,000 inmates will have their sentences cut from 13 years, to an average of 3 years. The main objective of this law is to save money; Michael Nachmanoff states the new rule "will save tens of millions of dollars, and hopefully allow the bureau of prisons to use those beds to house more dangerous people." 

My Opinion?- Personally, I believe this is extremely outrageous. Just because these criminals have not committed a "severe" crime and are not the most "dangerous" people, does not mean they should be released from prison by such a significant difference or even released early at all. Drugs, in my mind, are substances that severely debilitate an individual's ability to cope with society and benefit to it at all for that matter. These people's emotions and actions are completely influenced with drugs, especially cocaine; cocaine is not pot or weed, it is considered the most addictive drug and causes acute euphoria.  Euphoria can cause a person to commit many dangerous actions either towards themselves or to others. Having these people on the streets, whether they've committed a crime or not, is extremely dangerous to society because at any moment, these individuals can snap, due to the effects of drugs on their body. These people benefit very little if anything to society so why should they be let go from prison? Passing this law will risk the safety of those around these drug addicts. I have never heard of one situation where a drug addict, especially one addicted to cocaine, has ever offered any positive influences on society. In fact, they provide negative influences to those around them, creating a more dangerous, pandemonium society. This law, in my opinion, is completely unnecessary and quite honestly, crazy. Yes, I am well aware that it costs the government myriads of money to keep these people in jail, but rather that, than have them roaming the streets, threatening society. 

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/11/02/us/terms-for-crack-cocaine-reduced-freeing-prisoners.html?_r=1&ref=us

#9: Response to News Logs

During our discussion, the movie, A Beautiful Life, was brought up after a news log about the new movie 50/50 was shared. The movie was about a boy who had cancer and his friend was helping him through the grueling process. However, the movie had a positive, optimistic attitude, which is unusual for a movie about a cancer infected teenage boy. The class had mentioned how it was a relief because the normal view taken upon movies where a person is infected with cancer, is severely depressing. Which is why the movie A Beautiful Life was mentioned. I had never seen the movie, but the title did sound familiar to me. From what I gathered from the conversation, the film portrays an Italian family living through the holocaust and typically takes on a depressing mood. However, I heard that it does have light moments mixed into the drama. After this discussion, I am highly interested in watching this film because it seems very intriguing and from what I gathered, it is not your typical holocaust story (the same old depressing story), it does show glimpses of hope and the end is supposedly very touching. Therefore A Beautiful Life, is the film i shall watch when the weekend comes around!

#8 News Log: Keeping Surgical Infections at Bay With a Cocoon of Air

Summary: Nimbic Systems, Inc. has created a new surgical instrument, recently FDA approved, that is claimed to reduce the percentage of pathogens entering an incision during surgery, called Air Barrier System(ABS). This new technology will certainly aid in decreasing post surgical infections and complications such as MRSA, Septicemia, Atelectasis, and Cellulitis. The recent, cutting-edge medical device is composed of a reusable blower unit that feeds filtered air into a disposable nozzle. The nozzle is placed adjacent to the incision allowing a constant flow of purified air onto the incision site, which prevents any microbes in the O.R from entering the incision. ABS is a positive aspect for patients in several ways: it can ultimately protect them from any pathogens and infections that can be obtained and also acts as a money saver as well because a severe staph infection acquired by the patient can send medical bills into the six figures. The first surgery ABS was used on was a hip replacement, in which the wound is left to open air for an extended period of time, making the patient very susceptible to infection. The device had decreased the amount of microbes within the incision site by more than 84 percent. Now, ABS will be tested on patients in need of femoral or spinal surgeries (more invasive surgeries) to analyze the changes that ABS can make to create a safer surgical process for the patient.

My Opinion?: ABS is an amazing surgical instrument; technology has now advanced to the point where surgeries are becoming even safer to undergo. Just ten years ago, certain surgeries were claimed to have high infection risk factors, but now those surgeries can be performed with confidence, knowing that ABS will help decrease the risk of attaining severe bacterial infections. Not only will this device bring comfort and trust to the surgical process but it can also reduce the price of surgeries because during post-op, antibiotics are always bestowed to the patients "just in case" of infection. But pumping unnecessary antibiotics into the body is not exactly the healthiest process and can often even present side effects to the patient or a reaction. Therefore, if ABS reduces the amount of microbes in the incision site by over 84 percent, then post-op antibiotics would not need to be administered as often, depending on how invasive the surgery is. If the patient does not receive antibiotics, then the cost of medical bills will be slightly lower plus the patient will not become symptomatic to the antibiotics, decreasing the duration of recovery time. ABS will certainly make the patient's life, surgical staff's life, and even the patient's family's life significantly more at peace and ease. This device just goes to show what advances are being made within  medicine and what is yet to come that will bring reassurance to patients in the future. 

http://www.popsci.com/science/article/2011-10/keeping-surgical-infections-bay-cocoon-air

#7 News Log: Greece's Big Debt Drama Is a Muse for Its Artists

Summary: Greece is currently in a severe debt crisis but through all this, a bright light is still shinning. Much artistic activity is now taking place; seeming as though this crisis is inspiring myriads of art in all areas of art such as music, sculpting, writing, etc. Athens is the center of most of this artistic activity. There is a new energy that is forming that has not been seen anywhere else in the slow moving Mediterranean. Art galleries are thriving, painters are creating gems of artwork, filmmakers are capturing the reality of Greece's familiar conditions and turning it into a new strange uncertainty. An artist, who goes by Bleeps.gr, paints on buildings throughout the neighborhood of Psiri. One of his paintings portrays a woman clutching a sack of euros with a golden halo around her. Written on the halo, in Greek, were the words "Forty Years+Debtocracy." This referred to the restoration of Greece in 1974 after a seven year dictatorship, which ultimately led to today's debt. The artist claims that the woman is wondering what is going to happen. Another painting of his, portrays a model on a catwalk against a blue backdrop, which is labeled "Greece, the next economic model."These paintings reflect the frustration and pain the people within Greece are suffering from. And the artist is accurate when he writes "Greece the next economic model." Greece is becoming the country to NOT be; the country used in an example of economic failure. Many films were created to show the change Greece is going through and within these films, there seems to be a cry for the past. How things used to be seemed refreshing to the people. A play called "Antigone," sent a strong message to its audience saying: "What do we owe the family, and what do we owe the state? As the Greek crisis unfolds, these ancient questions are made painfully real. And another generation of Greek artists is asking them anew."

My Opinion?- I believe that the artists are bringing optimism to the people and themselves about their countries current state. However, I scanned through a few other works of Bleeps.gr's and found his art a bit controversial because he is a protester and a bit of a rioter himself. Being Greek, it is extremely disheartening and embarrassing that Greece has gotten to where it is today: People rioting in the streets, vandalization, loitering, and bankruptcy. This is not how the situation should be dealt with. A bright side to the artwork however, may enlighten the citizens of Greece and calm them a bit because the art expresses the frustration and apprehension that many people are feeling. This hopefully will calm the riots and poor behave of the people. I do not believe the increase in artistic activity will cure Greece of its debt drama and economic issues, but it will hopefully entice the citizens of Greece to relax and push through these hard times in an orderly, civilized manner. No one wants Greece to become that "economic model."

http://www.nytimes.com/2011/10/15/arts/in-athens-art-blossoms-amid-debt-crisis.html?ref=europe

#6 News Log: From Needle Stick to Cure for Hepatitis

Summary- If you were a doctor, what would you fear most? Losing a patient? Making a mistake risking malpractice rates to sky rocket? Or being pricked by an infected needle at work? Well, for many doctors it is becoming infected from a needle puncture on accident. Many have witnessed this take place and wonder what would happen if they were the one's in the situation. Everyday, doctors witness patients experiencing the excruciating process of marching toward death with hepatitis C and AIDS. Most lose hope and cannot resume habitual tasks done everyday of their lives for either fear of the past or complete loss of faith and credence. However, this was not the case for Dr. Douglas Dieterich. Dieterich was accidentally stuck by a needle contaminated by hepatitis C while working at a hospital as a third-year medical student. From that point on, Dr. Dieterich experienced enervating bouts of jaundice, fevers, and exhaustion. But Dr. Dieterich pushed through this disease and continued practicing medicine, soon becoming a national expert in hepatitis C. He has generated numerous clinical trials and drugs to counter the disease in order to better understand the virus. Now, he is cured of hepatitis C, thanks to a drug coalition he was involved in studying.
Dr. Dieterich is currently a professor at Mount Sinai Medical Center. "In the dark days of 1980s, I remember being really sick and thinking, 'Damn it. I hope I can help someone else before this virus gets me.' Now it looks like I can. I think it's the beginning of the end of hepatitis C, and that is one of the happiest statements I can make." In the end, thanks to Dr. Dieterich, we now have the tools to "start kicking some viral butt!"


My response?- After reading this article for the first time, i just thought to myself, this man never quit. He never lost faith even when life seemed to be fading away. He never showed signs of weakness, even when his disease was at its peak. And because of that determination and perseverance, Dr. Dieterich was able to muster up a cure for millions, including himself, infected with hepatitis C. Imagine your doctor informing you that you are infected with a life threatening disease that there is no cure for. Then someone, infected just like you, finds the cure because they were determined to save you first, even before themselves. Dr. Dieterich strongly emphasized the importance of finding this cure or at least an affective treatment before he himself, passed. What really became an eye-opener for me was that Dr. Dieterich had shown this perseverance in his past. He dreamed of always becoming a doctor, but was not accepted to medical school the first time around. In the end, he did not give up and luckily was accepted. Had he not been, this cure might not have come out for another several years. I highly admire Dr. Dieterich because I have always dreamed of becoming a doctor but I admit, school is not a breeze for me. I have to work very hard and sometimes the results do not reflect the effort exerted into what I do. But becoming a doctor is a dream I am extremely passionate about and would feel empty without at least attempting to give it a shot. The fact that Dr. Dieterich was not accepted to med school his first time around, made me think, well at least I have a second shot if plans go awry. As long as I have the determination and perseverance that Dr. Dieterich possessed, why can't I accomplish becoming a doctor? And look how he's contributed.
Now discussing the actual cure, I think Dr. Dieterich has shed light upon those infected with hepatitis C. Yes, it is a debilitating disease, and yes many treatments will not be affective. But we have the tools now; the tools that will cure a disease once labeled incurable. With this, doctors and researchers can unlock new treatments and cures for possibly the other forms of hepatitis. All in all, Dr. Dieterich's resiliency, miracle, and commitment has shed hope on a promising future for modern medicine.
      http://well.blogs.nytimes.com/2011/10/13/from-needle-stick-to-cure-for-hepatitis/?ref=health

#5 Technology

I honestly do not depend on technology too much but if there was one piece I'd have a difficult time without would be my cellphone because it is my main source of communication. If I need to get in touch with someone whether for an important reason or just to say hi, I need my cellphone. Especially if it is an emergency because I have been in an emergency situation and needed to get in touch with my parents but had no means of doing so, creating many problems.

#4 Self Reliance

I believe self reliance is the act of relying on yourself to do what is best for yourself and others. Almost as if you have confidence or trust in yourself to be able to decipher what will be most beneficial to you in life. If you do not have self reliance, then it is most likely that you will not make the correct decisions or even just work yourself to the best of your abilities.

Number 3, Quote by Nathaniel Hawthorne

"Words -- so innocent and powerless as they are, as standing in a dictionary, how potent for good and evil they become in the hands of one who knows how to combine them."

I believe this quote means that words, as innocent as they may look, are powerful tools and express the feelings or emotions of a person so definitively if, however, they know how to utilize them properly. Words speak loudly and can sometimes express more than actions.

Memoir Title

The title of my autobiography/ memoir would be Nicole Panagakos: A string of musical moments. I believe this title would be appropriate because many of the most significant moments in my life I relate to music with. I always hear or see music in some way during my life or use certain moments to influence how I play piano and color each piece of music.

My Favorite Things

1.) When my sister's and I all go to the beach
2.) My dad's humor
3.) My mom's cooking
4.) My dog's big brown eyes when he lays on my lap
5.) Going for walks with my friends
6.) Playing the piano
7.) Watching movies
8.) Christmas time!!
9.) Going to work and helping people
10.) Playing volleyball for fun with my sister

Practice Post

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